Muscatine

What do you think the writer is saying in this poem?

Father and Son

A father and son went out to empty pastureland
There for the father to kill the son

Insects scratched the air above the clover
No angel came to stop the father

Small mammals hurried through the hedgerows
And the blackbirds sat in a crooked row

And no ram appeared on the son?’s behalf
So the son killed the father to save himself

And after that there was no help for him
Because all help must come from the father

By BLP

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=30873

Peace

Gee.....I don't know,...maybe...

he/she is saying that he's off his medication and needs someone to run him down to the drugstore..and that his mind is kind of screwed up...and when he gets like this he can't keep from rambling on...creating meaningless halfwit poetry,...and someone better do something quick! At least that's what I think.

Bobsdad



I would have never thought you were the coward you just proved yourself to be............


Good luck!

Peace

Get serious

Should not an educated post preceed you asking for ''aN'' educated guess??

I venture to guess the writer is saying ''I have no idea how to write decent poetry!'' Just aweful.

I hope this was not penned by Josh, for your sake anyway.